This is such an obvious thing that I'm a little embarrassed to comment on it, but I really like that your introduction of Keller is a very human interpretation of how someone in hiding might be on a date, without being too heavy-handed about it. I really love the transition from the mundane to the fantastic.
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Date: 2010-07-31 01:22 pm (UTC)